I like English because we get to make up stories. I like drawing pictures and then telling my story. My teachers help me make my writing better.

 

I like English because I can write about my own ideas.

 

I like using my red pen because I get to fix my own work.

 

I like using my red pen to edit my work. I can read it again and see if I need to change something. The editing starters help me because they give me ideas about what to look for. 

 

English is fun because I can be creative and write about things I have imagined. I like the green and pink highlighting because I can see what I have done well and what I need to improve. It helps me make my writing better.

 

I enjoy English because I can be creative and develop my own ideas through writing. The green and pink highlighting is useful because it makes the feedback clear — I can see what I have done well and what my next step is. The red pen and editing starters have helped me become more independent at editing because I know what I need to look for and how to improve my writing.